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Ending: Game Over

Unlock Conditions: Die at any point.




Fluttershy screamed in agony as the monster tore into her flesh. She screamed and cried, but it was to no avail. Her heart stopped and her body began to drain of life. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as she closed them.

'I'm…sorry Dash…' were the last words she thought as she left this world.


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Twilight was sitting, staring at the three different pictures that were morphing before her in the infinite swirling darkness around her. She still didn't understand what the pictures meant, but she could only assume that each represented the psyche of one of her friends going through the mind delve.

Suddenly, the one in the middle began to grow dull, the picture slowly growing black.

"Huh?" Twilight said, not sure what to make of the scene. The picture was growing darker within its frame.

Then, from the center of the picture, a black fire erupted. The black fire spread across the foundation of the picture, burning it away. It engulfed the entire middle picture, before the fire jumped and started to burn the other two pictures.

"What…what's going on!?" Twilight said in a panic, not knowing what was happening. The fire quickly began to engulf the other two moving pictures, wrapping each in the burning inferno of the black fire. Soon, all three pictures had disappeared, devoured by the black fire that had appeared.

Twilight felt herself being pulled, dragged out forcibly from the swirling darkness back to reality.

Twilight groaned as she rubbed her forehead.

"What just happened?" she asked opening her eyes to look before her.

Laying on the ground were her three friends.

"…H-Hey…what's the matter?" She said getting closer to her friends, putting a hoof against Fluttershy. "Fluttershy?" She asked shaking her a little, "Pinkie Pie? Rainbow Dash?" Twilight shook each of them repeatedly.

"Hey…t-this isn't funny! Wake up!" She called out, shaking them harder. But no matter how hard she shook, they didn't move. "Come on! You guys are fine, right!? You're playing a bad trick on me! Come on! Wake up!"

Twilight stopped shaking them, her mouth quivering. She carefully lowered a hoof against Fluttershy's neck.

Her heart sank as she felt no pulse.

She quickly checked Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. They were the same.

"Oh no…oh no…ohnoohnoohnoOHNO." Twilight said backing away, feeling the panic swelling inside her, "What…what have I done!?" She cried out as tears began to fall from her face.

Somehow, someway, she had just managed to kill three of her best friends.
Well that was a quick decision lol. It's pretty much unanimous to upload the endings as I finish them, so you guys get your wish XD

Here's the ending everyone saw coming first haha. I promise the next ending won't be AS expected.
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XxAskRagexX Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
i think i might know whats going on since it's rainbow dash pinkie pie and fluttershy i think of my little amnesia
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ReignXCrimson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Bad end sucks to my unfortunate self i can picture things clearly in my head
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ReignXCrimson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
FFFFUCK.... NOW I WONT SLEEP
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Synchel Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Wooo! I love that moment of dawning comprehension. Whether it's in a movie, horror story, comedy, or physics classroom. Seeing that "click" moment when someone makes a big connection is always satisfying.
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killyouchik112 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:furious::furious::furious::furious:
:furious::furious::furious::furious:
:furious::furious::furious::furious:
NONONONONONONONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So I take it you really liked this ending? =3
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killyouchik112 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
WHAT DO YOU THINK! HUH!
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xTaraTheRastaKittyx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student
when is the download thing coming out?
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GentalmanBoxer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Bad end.
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GentalmanBoxer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Weeeellllll I don't want that ending now do I.
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TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
Oh gods. What a terrible end. Poor twilight and poor everyone else.
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Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Comment: Lol

Achievement:
Well that sucks
0 of 2000 Gm
(Die and bring your friends with you)
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IDK-youTellMe Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
Twillight just killed three of her closest friends... DAMN, just imagine how her life will be now... seriously, it's sad...
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heroking678 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
are the endings going to be similar to the first one?
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animefreak120 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh man, three of the mane cast dying at once? That's horrible. And filled with angst. And I love angst. 8D
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Ourakiritsu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Fluttershy? Fluttersy! FLUTTERSHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
*dun dun dundundun, dun, dun, dun!* Game Over
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
End 1 :

Type : They all die, ''because''... or the ''I'm bored. Rock falls, they all die.''

Not really interesting end, in many ways, really.
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MerC312 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think its because hes following the usual Silent Hill way of doing things. There IS a trademark game over. And this is what I suppose he has done here ^^
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dead82 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
cute....in a....evil way
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ardashir Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
Poor Fluttershy! Poor Twi and Pinkie and Dashy!

Man but you write some nasty stuff happening to the poor girls. It's well done, mind, but still... *shudder*
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Sh4dowSentinel Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is my favorite ending! (so far(I have only read this one)
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Detherok69 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
So if Fluttershy dies, so will Dash and Pinkie?! Now THAT is a chain reaction
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Fresko-1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:icontwilightnoesplz: noo.. what have I done!? Fluttershy, cmon.. please wake up.. Flutter... FLUUTTERSHY! [link]
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ArcAngelV1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
copy and paste my response to ~griever789
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MerC312 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nooooooo!!! Why do I feel sad for Twilight and not the others?
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ArcAngelV1 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
At least this game over ending didn't have the OBVIOUS Metal Gear Solid reference... Damn you Otacon... But I digress, predictable ending is predictable :p
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griever789 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Fluttershy! Flutershry!!! FLUTTERSHY!!!!!!
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ArcAngelV1 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
There is a special place in pony hell for people like you.
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RangerGxi Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
O_o
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NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Wait, if Fluttershy dies, then ALL of them die?!

That doesn't seem fair... D:
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Streek471 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Well it is a mind link, it stands to reason that if the one who's mind your in gets screwed, you get screwed in turn.
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Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Since when was Silent Hill or Silent Ponyville fair? It makes sense to me that that's a risk of sharing the mind delve, it all hinges all the central party.

Which means that if Demitri dies, then Twilight dies too in your fic.
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NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
I know it's not fair.

Just remarking on how much it sucks for the other two, is all...
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Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
The whole thing already sucked for everyone, and I would imagine Pinkie figured that was a risk, if only subconsciously. So really, I guess all I have to say is this: :/
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CodyMau Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Again!? Aww man... *loads up my saved game*
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Drakasin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
"No save files found"
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CodyMau Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
*does my Spike impersonation* Noooooooooooo!
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Drakasin Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
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U mad?
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SirCookays Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Happy endings for everyone.
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Streek471 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
And we get the bummer ending.
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Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Well, that was expected, so it's not like it's a big deal. Seriously, this is coming from ME.
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Callmesnake Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Isnt this what Dimitri exploded on her about? Risking her friends lives like that?
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NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Eeeeyup.

Believe me, knowing you COULD have hurt someone close to you like that is enough to make you vomit.

I know this from personal experience with a mishap that happened because of my stupidity that could've sent my sister to the hospital if real life Deus Ex Machina hadn't stepped in. That... still sickens me to this day...
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jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, but his reasoning for why was wrong in context. And it's something I can't explain till SP3 (whenever I get around to it). Just know that he was right about risking their lives, but wrong about WHY she was P:
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Streek471 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
So, quick question about SP3, have you figured out who the next victim is? Not asking you to say who it is, just curious.
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jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Victims and yes. Though my next story won't be Silent Ponyville, and will be fairly long, so sorry to have to make you wait for it ^^
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Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Wait, VICTIMS, plural? That's news to me.
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:iconjake-heritagu:
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Heehee...I'm such a tease :3
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Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Tell me about it...

*incoherent grumbling*
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Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Is it still set in the Silent Ponyville continuity like Too Shy for a Rainbow was?
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