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August 13, 2011
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Ending: Game Over

Unlock Conditions: Die at any point.

Fluttershy screamed in agony as the monster tore into her flesh. She screamed and cried, but it was to no avail. Her heart stopped and her body began to drain of life. Her eyes rolled into the back of her head as she closed them.

'I'm…sorry Dash…' were the last words she thought as she left this world.


Twilight was sitting, staring at the three different pictures that were morphing before her in the infinite swirling darkness around her. She still didn't understand what the pictures meant, but she could only assume that each represented the psyche of one of her friends going through the mind delve.

Suddenly, the one in the middle began to grow dull, the picture slowly growing black.

"Huh?" Twilight said, not sure what to make of the scene. The picture was growing darker within its frame.

Then, from the center of the picture, a black fire erupted. The black fire spread across the foundation of the picture, burning it away. It engulfed the entire middle picture, before the fire jumped and started to burn the other two pictures.

"What…what's going on!?" Twilight said in a panic, not knowing what was happening. The fire quickly began to engulf the other two moving pictures, wrapping each in the burning inferno of the black fire. Soon, all three pictures had disappeared, devoured by the black fire that had appeared.

Twilight felt herself being pulled, dragged out forcibly from the swirling darkness back to reality.

Twilight groaned as she rubbed her forehead.

"What just happened?" she asked opening her eyes to look before her.

Laying on the ground were her three friends.

"…H-Hey…what's the matter?" She said getting closer to her friends, putting a hoof against Fluttershy. "Fluttershy?" She asked shaking her a little, "Pinkie Pie? Rainbow Dash?" Twilight shook each of them repeatedly.

"Hey…t-this isn't funny! Wake up!" She called out, shaking them harder. But no matter how hard she shook, they didn't move. "Come on! You guys are fine, right!? You're playing a bad trick on me! Come on! Wake up!"

Twilight stopped shaking them, her mouth quivering. She carefully lowered a hoof against Fluttershy's neck.

Her heart sank as she felt no pulse.

She quickly checked Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. They were the same.

"Oh no…oh no…ohnoohnoohnoOHNO." Twilight said backing away, feeling the panic swelling inside her, "What…what have I done!?" She cried out as tears began to fall from her face.

Somehow, someway, she had just managed to kill three of her best friends.
Well that was a quick decision lol. It's pretty much unanimous to upload the endings as I finish them, so you guys get your wish XD

Here's the ending everyone saw coming first haha. I promise the next ending won't be AS expected.
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XxAskRagexX Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
i think i might know whats going on since it's rainbow dash pinkie pie and fluttershy i think of my little amnesia
ReignXCrimson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Bad end sucks to my unfortunate self i can picture things clearly in my head
ReignXCrimson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Synchel Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Wooo! I love that moment of dawning comprehension. Whether it's in a movie, horror story, comedy, or physics classroom. Seeing that "click" moment when someone makes a big connection is always satisfying.
killyouchik112 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So I take it you really liked this ending? =3
killyouchik112 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
xTaraTheRastaKittyx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student
when is the download thing coming out?
GentalmanBoxer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Bad end.
GentalmanBoxer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
Weeeellllll I don't want that ending now do I.
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