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Ending: And That's When the Meteor Hit

Unlock Condition: You must find several unusual items during your second playthrough of the game.

-The Book of Basics in the Tunnel Labyrinth
-The Ninja Mask in the Abandoned House
-The Odd Shaped Red Shirt in the Hospital before finding the Second Eye
-The Broken Sword Handle in the burning house where Rainbow Dash was
-A Playing Card with a Brown Haired Colts Head in The Study of Fluttershy's Old Home

She carefully pushed the door open and walked through the door.

On the otherside was a large open room, almost like a small gymnasium. She walked forward to the middle of the room, when she stopped.

A black fire was burning on the opposite side of the court. The fire slowly grew, rising up into the shape of a pony, before red eyes appeared on its face, a white mouth opening. It was the dark creature.

Fluttershy stared at the creature. She didn't feel a heavy, overbearing presence this time. The creature was still drawing fear from her heart, but it wasn't overwhelming her now. She could stand before this creature now.

However, before either of them could move or speak, a light burst forth from her saddlebag.

Fluttershy jumped back in surprise as from her bag rose up the five seemingly random objects, each glowing in a white light as they began to circle the worried mare.

Then, in a second surprise, the five objects burst up to the ceiling of the room, combining together in a magnificent bright light. Fluttershy tried her best to follow it, but the ball of light came shooting towards the ground with a blinding speed.

With a large explosion the object crashed between Fluttershy and the Dark Creature, sending dust, debris and a huge blast of wind around the gym. Fluttershy was amazed she somehow had stayed on her feet through the ordeal.

Through the clouds of smoke and dust, a loud cough could be heard.

"Agh! Dammit Brad! You're supposed to warn me when these things happen!" Came a strange voice.

"Hey, I had to get in here myself!" Came a separate voice. With a second burst of wind from seemingly nowhere, the dust and smoke cleared. There before Fluttershy stood a brown coat and haired earth pony standing next to a green pony in black and green ninja gear.

"But…but…my story!" The brown pony groaned putting a hoof to his face.

"We've got plenty of time to fix it later Sam; I need to have my fun!" Brad grinned, "But its time for this guy to meet my secret weapon!" Brad reached into his outfit before pulling out a master ball. He gave it a quick toss, as from it appeared a large humanoid, wearing torn white rags, wielding a gigantic metal sword and a large metallic pyramid on his head.

"…Didn't someone more famous make this joke?" Sam raised an eyebrow at Brad.

"Yea, but he didn't do this! Pyramid Head! Use ultimate distraction!"

The Pyramid head seemed to move slowly before the Dark Creature. The Dark Creature raised its eyebrow curiously.

Then, the Pyramid Head reached to the ground, picking up a top hat and cane. He placed the top hat gently against his head, before suddenly, from out of nowhere; music began to play as he danced.

"Hello, my baby
Hello, my honey
Hello, my ragtime gal

Send me a kiss by wire
Baby, my hearts on fire

If you refuse me
Honey, you'll lose me
Then you'll be left alone

Oh baby, telephone
And tell me I'm your own"

The dark creature seemed to open its eyes wide in shock as it watched the horrendous creature dance before it. There was no describing what it was that was before him

"Gotcha now!" Brad cried out, appeared above the dark creature, before rushing downwards and slamming down onto the dark creature, the creature letting out a loud roar as an explosion seemed to rock his being.

"Ugh…" Sam groaned as he got up and walked over to Fluttershy who was just staring at the spectacle with her mouth agape, "My apologies Fluttershy, I'll get this story back on track as soon as my editor is done having his moment."

"Wha…" was the only word that escaped Fluttershy's mouth. Then in a weird sensation, she felt a warm, gentle pulse fill her body as her wounds seemed to escape her. The brown haired pony was unwrapping her bandages before she could realize it. However, when the bandages fell to the floor, she felt fine. Whatever he had done, he had fixed her body.

"You feel alright?" Sam asked curiously.

"Uh…y-yea…" Fluttershy looked at Sam, blinking again.

"Again, sorry, my editor Brad there…he refused to let me get away without him having his fun." Sam rolled his eyes a little when another explosion was heard from the other-side of the gymnasium. Suddenly, before the two of them a Brad appeared.

"Hey, this is all non-canon anyways, let me have my fun!" Brad laughed.

"Non…canon?" Fluttershy was in shock.

"Brad…I think we've put Fluttershy into catatonic shock now." Sam said poking the young mare before him, which didn't seem to generate a response.

"That's alright, we'll fix her up as soon as we're finished here, and I thought you'd be the most appropriate to deal the final blow to this blob." Brad seemed to grin behind his mask.

"…What did you have in mind?" Sam asked raising an eyebrow at Brad.

"Use an old trick of yours!" Brad said before suddenly moving quickly. Sam wasn't sure what he did, but suddenly his hoof felt very hot. He lifted it up and looked at it, to find that Brad had set it on fire.

"Oh…I get it…" Sam said, as the searing hot pain began to tear at his nerves.

The bloody mess of the dark creature was crawling forward as best it could, letting out horrifying whines at the damage Brad had done. Sam suddenly appeared before it, as the creature looked up at the fire burning on Sam's hoof.

"I'm doing this for Brad. So now!" Sam held his hoof over his head, "Here I go! This hoof of mine is BURNING RED! Its loud roar tells me to GRASP VICTORY!" He pulled his hoof back, "ERUPTING…BURNING…HOOF!" Sam thrust his hoof down onto the head of the Dark Creature, "AND NOW…THE END!" The Dark Creature roared out as it suddenly erupted in a huge explosion. The fire on Sam's hand extinguished at this.

"Excellent Sam!" Brad laughed happily.

"Are we done now?" Sam said looking at Fluttershy, who seemed to have become a white statue, "I think we need to get back to the computer and fix this trauma."

"Hold on! There's ONE LAST THING I need to do while we're here!" Brad laughed.

"…Oh no…what're you doing Brad?" Sam winced a little, not ready for what Brad had in mind.

"Oh, something that'll make the fans VERY happy!" He said standing up on his hind hooves before clapping his hooves together.

Lance was busy writing down notes in his office about his latest patient. He was going to have to remember to increase her medication by about 50 milligrams for it provide better results, though he'd have to add a liquid portion to her diet to substitute the increase nausea the medicine would add as a side effect.

Suddenly there was a knock at his office door and he groaned softly to himself.

"Come in." He called out.

"I can't." Said the voice behind the door.

"Why not?" Lance growled, displeased with having to break from his studies.

"I have something for you that I can't get through the door at the moment; I need you to open it."

"…Fine." Lance grunted as he got up from his desk. He carefully maneuvered around the piles of books that lay stacked around his office as he approached the door. He lifted his hoof up and opened it, looking down into what seemed to be a black hole.

"Hey, yea, I couldn't stop by here without dropping you a visit. And I figured what better way to show you how I feel about your 'canon' then by showing you my cannon?" Brad sat atop a huge cannon that somehow he had managed to fit into the hallway.

A loud explosion rang out, rocking the whole hospital at its very foundation as the cannon was fired at point blank range.

"…Yea…I apologize for this again." Sam said looking at Fluttershy who stood next to him in the hallway looking at the cannon as best they could through the wrecked hallway, filled with smoke and debris. Though admittedly the floor was now given a good view of the sky.

"…What…" Fluttershy mumbled.

"Uhm…this is all a bad dream?" Sam smiled awkwardly.

"…Yes…yes this was all a bad dream." Fluttershy murmured to herself.


    "And so, once again, the day was saved. The ponies Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy can go on living happily, with none of the trauma, cause I said so, Lance Strongshy got torn to pieces by a cannonball, And everything was better forever, thanks to that dashing editor Brad"
    "Are you done ruining my story yet?"
...Okay...This ending is a combination of, fan requests to save Fluttershy and Brad just wanting to Ham it up in the Spotlight. He is my awesome Editor and without him this story would have many more continuity errors and plot-holes than Swiss cheese. So this ending is mostly for him, but I hope you guys can enjoy the insanity of the moment.

and for those who don't get the references used.

Pyramid head dancing and the music: [link]
Sam Using the Erupting Burning Finger: [link]
The Erupting Burning Finger: [link]

I just hope no one gets angry at all this OC Rape of the story in this ending, but come on, if you don't laugh a little you have no soul XD

Also with this, Silent Ponyville officially draws to a close. I'm so glad you could all join me for the ride! It was a lot of fun and I enjoyed every moment of it.

I hope you'll all enjoy my next story, which will be an epic ride fil lwith insanity and fun ^_^
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ReignXCrimson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Awesome story must read more
Gangnamstyle2011 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
If you see fluttershy, tell her I said, she's a bitch!
eyeplante Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Why Pyramid Head? And WTF!!?!?!?!
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cause he's doing his job now, being a sellout!
RavenRyy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
I just finished reading the whole story and the endings, and by god man, you did great work!

The singing Pyramid head had me in stiches!

I listened to the Silent Hill 2 soundtrack (with a bit of Nox Arcana) while reading this.

Thank so very much for writing this and doing it so well!
twister4241 Featured By Owner May 5, 2012
I AM NOT HAPPY. But it was funny.
MollyFlutter Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
where can i find just the pic?
Jbob98 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
I love randomness and cannons |3
Kou-Daze Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
I just love cannons!
luckyboy2308 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
endings 2, 6 aaaaaannnnnnd this one are my favourites of silent ponyville 2!
foxymew Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
best ending
TeenDarkMagician Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
You know, if this were a game and Skyrim wasn't out yet, I would bet that this would get game of the year just because of this ending. 10/10 I love it Nice Job!
Kiiwily Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
Bahahaha XD Side, burning, can't breathe! BEST ending, EVER
Khadict Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
while this was funny 6 was the best ending of them all and if in a game I would want it to be the normal ending as its the happiest and who doesn't like a happy ending?
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ending 6 already is the canon ending XD
Khadict Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
ok scratch that got them mixed up lol
Khadict Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
ok checked again it was 6 ha im terrible
Thormack91 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2011
Linkara reference FTW!! :squee:

Perfect fit for a random ending such as this. :D
TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
Gutovi-kun Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This was so freaking cool, I have literaly LOL'ed so hard my father come to my room and aske me what happened
Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I have finished 1 & 2 and all it's endings and left a list of comments... Unless SPIII I already out I bid you an ado do now

"Sorry and thinks for the Achievments"

Fluttershy: A hundred miles have made me colder, a hundred years have made me older
Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Comment: wow... Just wow again I forgot most what I was gonna say... But the "Mortal Kombar Theme" played through my reading of this..


Gee ya think?
0 of 2000
(Expiriance the oddest thing in SPII)
KitsuneKyukon Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
I didn't laugh for most of it. I smiled, sure, but I didn't go into full-out laughter until that last line. Then I finally cracked up. X3

"Are you done ruining my story yet?"
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Good to know I can even crack up the hard to crack like yourself X3
speedyson Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Forget the regular canon, I'm going for the canon with a cannon! (seriously, though, both endings are good, just want Lance to die in a fire.
Enyoiyourself Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Awesome, im just, have to create a new word to ilustrate how many lulz this has brought me:

Sh4dowSentinel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw jeeze, now I can't get the image of dancing Pyramid head out of my head!
animefreak120 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
This amuses me. xD The last line is the best. "Are you done ruining my story yet?"

I love the Pyramid Head cameo, too. ^3^
RangerGxi Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
SasukeUchihaUke Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
you forgot to add "TAKE THIS, MY LOVE, MY ANGER, AND ALL OF MY SORROW!!!!"
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's shining finger. I followed the quote for Burning Finger word for word. IF you don't believe me, look at the video I posted in the description ^_^
SasukeUchihaUke Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
that's my bad! XD sorry :P
Ninja-brad Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
That's Shining Finger, Not Burning Finger
JoelDashReed Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
Now, I can sleep better knowing you kick Lace's ass. 8)

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ArcAngelV1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
Erupting burning hoof... Can it be? Is there someone out there besides me who actually likes Gundam? I must admit that seed and double O are better then the series you referenced though. I refuse to comment on the pyramid head. And hitting Lance with a normal, if not over-sized, cannon... really... the proper answer was obviously to hit him point blank in the face with a Spartan Laser. But I suppose if it must be a cannon then at least make it the fuel rod or mass driver variant. If I had my way it would have been an orbital strike though.
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
...Oh you did NOT just say Double O was better than G Gundam! D<

Seed and Destiny, oh yea, my favorite Gundam Series, but Gundam 00 had me almost foaming at the mouth at how stupid and incomprehensible it was! The first 25 episodes served absolutely NO purpose other than to put the main bad guy in charge, and then they just SKIP 4 years into the future resolving NOTHING. THEN they do nothing for 25 more episodes before coming to a half-assed conclusion based on Deus Ex Machina particles |:

...Sorry, I dislike Double O with a passion and would much rather watch G Gundam any day of the week XD
ArcAngelV1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
I run my mind on a strict diet of organized chaos so I have no issues following extremely loose plots like those. I find them rather enjoyable actually. I do realize that this makes me slightly more weird than Pinkie Pie. And now in my randomness, I think I'll just watch some Gurren Lagan, maybe chase it with Gundam Wing. Why? Because we kill people.
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I can't fault you for liking Wing, also a good series. Never seen Gurren though.
kaijinzero Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
pyramid head singing "hello my baby" in a top hat.....i can see this happening.
FlyingNinjaBannanas Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
How could you not like this? It's gold.
RangerGxi Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
thecrazyd Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist
HOLY SHIT! That is something i would do. LOVE IT!!!
NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011


*phones lawyer*
Ninja-brad Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
I'll be honest, this is likely more something sam would know about, But I'll bite, what joke are you talking about?
NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
In the comments for the second ending, someone commented, "OBVIOUSLY THE CANNON ENDING!!!"

Taking advantage of the typo, I joked, saying that the CANNON ending was one of the joke endings...

DON'T PRETEND YOU DON'T KNOW! *points accusingly*
Ninja-brad Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
Oh, huh, Well rather then be angry, shouldn't you be happy that the joke was taken ,and used to shoot a horrible horrible pony like Lance?
NotAGoodUsername360 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
Mmmm... no. :P
Ace2401 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011

You two crack me up.
houka-hearts-kinzoku Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
BEST ENDING EVER!! Nothing like Pyramid head doing the dance. :D
Nova225 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
End 7 :

... Throwing a pokeball with a pyramidhead inside : It's from *Linkara*, right ? ...

>The dark creature seemed to open its eyes wide in shock as it watched the horrendous creature dance before it.
-Pretty sure I would also be ''in shock'', seeing anything dance on that music. ;)

>"Oh, something that'll make the fans VERY happy!"
>Brad sat atop a huge cannon that somehow he had managed to fit into the hallway.
-Well... I would have gone for the Big SWAT Team, and the banishment To The Moon (but mostly the SWAT team)... but I guess a cannon does the job too.
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