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Ending – It's a twist

Unlock Condition: Don't see all of the memories before facing Slender Mane for the last time

She opened the door, stepping out.

Outside the door she saw four torches lit around an open arena. A pathway was lit for her leading to it. A fence was placed along the path and arena so she couldn't go anywhere else.

She gently put her lantern away as she walked towards the center of the arena. She could feel small tremors shaking through the world as she walked.

As she reached one side of the arena, from the ground on the opposite side the Slender Pony emerged from ground. He stood tall over her, his presence still bearing down.

"The truth…" Pinkie whispered to herself as she stared at the Slender Pony, her phonograph letting off a slight buzz.

"I see…it's the truth behind everything isn't it…something I've been hiding from, something that you show me." She tried to rationalize everything.

The Slender Pony began to walk slowly towards, the haze of his presence beginning to attack her mind. She closed her eyes as she tried to think, the steps of the Slender Pony echoed through the room as the haze grew deeper in her head.

An image of Bellamina appeared in her mind through the haze. The image was strong, it was loud, it spoke to her.

Her eye's shot open. The realization dawned upon her as the Slender Pony stood a few feet away from her, the Phonograph was ringing like it'd never rang before.

"…I must fight through." Pinkie gulped as her mind fogged over. "I've managed through monsters, this towns horrors, even myself…I will beat you too." Pinkie fought through the blaring haze, lifting her front hoof and pressing it against the Slender Pony's body.

A wave of pain rocked her body as she cried out, the haze enveloping her mind. She felt a torrential sea of different experiences crashing through her body as she become overwhelmed by the Slender Pony.

The images of Bellamina swirled in her head. She could see some of the memories that she had lost. She saw herself as Bellamina, she saw the pain of another young filly being tortured by the colt that was this Slender Pony, she felt the influx of horrible emotions invade her body. Emotions she didn't want to be real, no, they couldn't be real.

These things hadn't happened to someone she cared so much about. She couldn't accept these horrors as they were presented to her. Her sister was too precious. The images told her that Bellamina was dead, but she couldn't accept the truth.

The world escaped her as she felt herself falling again. Everything swirled, her head spinning, pain filled her senses before she finally lost her bearings.

Twilight pulled her head back from Pinkie Pie's forehead. She rubbed her head as she looked at her pink friend. She wasn't sure exactly what had just happened, but she knew it hadn't been longer than a few minutes. Pinkie was still sitting there with her eyes closed.

"Pinkie? Are you alright?" She asked her friend.

It was quiet for a moment before Pinkie slowly opened her eyes, looking at Twilight.

"You okay?" Twilight asked, getting a little closer to Pinkie. Pinkie simply blinked in response, "Did…the mind delve work?" She asked, looking into Pinkie's eyes for a response.

"…Twilight…" Pinkie said, almost as if she was surprised to see her.

"Yea, it's me Pinkie Pie. Are you feeling better now?" Twilight asked, trying to gauge where her friend was.

Pinkie didn't really answer. She looked down at her hooves, then back up to Twilight, then began to slowly scan the contents of the library.

"So…this is really true…isn't it…" Pinkie muttered softly before lowering her head, her hair covering most of her face as she closed her eyes.

"Pinkie? It's alright, I'm here, and you can talk to me." Twilight said trying to reassure her friend.

"…Thank you Twilight…" Pinkie said solemnly, "You…have helped me…you've…made me realize the truth about myself." She muttered quietly.

"The truth about yourself? What is it?" Twilight asked curiously.

"I'm…" Pinkie shifted her head away from Twilight, opening her eyes but not looking at her, "I'm not…I'm not Pinkie Pie…" she said quietly, "And…I never was."

"Huh?" Twilight asked confused, "But…of course you're Pinkie Pie. You're the friend we've come to know and love here, Ponyville's number one party pony." Twilight explained.

"Yes…that's what you've come to know me as…because that's the identity I adopted." Pinkie softly sighed as she raised her head to look at Twilight. "Twilight…the dreams I was having…they stemmed from a trauma I survived as a child…your mind delve helped me realize that. And…now that I've dealt with that trauma thanks to your spell…I've come to realize…I'm not Pinkie Pie." She took a deep breath.

"My name…is Bellamina Marie Pie." She spoke clearly. "My sister, Pinkamena Diane Pie died when we were kids. I…I wasn't able to accept that my sister, who put a smile on all of our faces, who was the cheerful party lover…died in such a tragic way all those years ago. So…in my mind I had myself die in her place and I took over as Pinkamena." She closed her eyes as she turned her body to face Twilight.

"This Cutie Mark is real…but it was summoned up because my mind made it my special talent, so that I could be my sister." Bellamina sighed, "I've been dyeing my fur and hair for as long as I can remember, just to hide this fact."

"P-Pinkie…" Twilight said in shock. This seemed like a lot to take in, like it shouldn't be real.

"It's…Bellamina Twilight." She said, almost hurt that she had to correct this person she had come to know as her friend, "I can't keep living the lie anymore. Doing so was tearing me apart inside. So…I need to come clean with who I am." Bellamina stood up and walked towards one of the bookcases.

"D-Don't get me wrong though…I've become a lot like my sister now. So…who I am will still be a lot like her…" Bellamina said trying to dispel any worry in her friend, "I just…I guess I won't be as hectic as I was when I was Pinkie…" she turned to Twilight, a weak smile appearing on her face, "And…I'll need help telling the others…if that's alright."

Twilight stared a little dumbfounded. She seriously had to take in all of this news. It was almost too much to bear.

"This is…this is real, isn't it?" Twilight said, almost unable to believe.

Bellamina nodded her head slowly.

"…Then…I guess I have no choice, do I?" Twilight said, taking a deep breath before standing up and smiling. "This is the real you right? And you, even if you might not be Pinkie Pie, are still my dear friend. If you need help, then I will help you."

"…Thank you Twilight." Bellamina smiled as a tear formed at the edge of her eye.

-The End-
Silent Ponyville Ending - It's a Twist

...Unable to accept the fact that her sister was killed instead of her, Pinkie Pie kills herself to become her sister, so that she might live.

Awesome cover art maybe by :iconlonewolfkait: [link]
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StellaNora Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Student
Hmm...Well atleast SOMEPONY is alive i guess
bruiser128 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
It isn't about who you were or what you did in the past, it's about what you have done with others in the present that makes you a friend"
SonicRainBoom706 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
by the way, this has somthing to do with the game?
BassDropThePony Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist




SonicRainBoom706 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
its not completed
SonicRainBoom706 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
Incredible, awesome, amazing. love it
Kiranta Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
The twist ending, didn't see that one coming.
Angel-kitty2012 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
NintenZero Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
WOAH. That's... Awesome man. What a twist.
AcidRain1313 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
xAndiesaurusx Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
/that's what I was thinking. Woah...
z4tf2derp Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
hmmm i'm not mad just at a loss for words....
xavicura Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
i....i have not words...
Iambrony99 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Now this ending i do not find fitting, of course it would be excellent for some people, i do not find it fitting because, well, ok, i got nothin, but just don't include this ending, i would like a different ending if you did this in the game, i do like the scheme of this ending tho!
viktorivov Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Lol what a twist :/
Fighterx345 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
"...Unable to accept the fact that her sister was killed instead of her, Pinkie Pie kills herself to become her sister, so that she might live."
So... was Bellamina living a lie as Pinkie Pie, OR, based on the description, did Pinkie Pie finally SNAP, at that moment CONVINCING herself that she IS Bellamina?! Hence, "Pinkie Pie 'kills herself' to 'become her sister'"... "so that she might live"...
In short, Pinkie goes insane and pretends to be Bellamina instead of vice versa.... based on the description.
Blartflarg Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Its still physicality Pinkie but she assumes the roll of Bellamina.
BoySamusMetroid Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
I want this to be the canon ending. It's so awesome. I'm in awe of this story. Not what I expected at all.
GentalmanBoxer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
I don't know how i feel about this ending but I'll say this I like it.
HCACTCOYH Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
I really liked the twist, but I don't feel that the hair color or cutie mark needed to be explained; no one in Ponyville would have known what Pinkie Pie looked like. They could only refer to Bellamina's warped memories of prevents events. What I'm trying to say is that, with this twist, the bright pink earth pony could have been Bellamina all along with no further explanation required.
yayisnotaartist Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
wow. I never thought. God i love this fanfic.
Shouten-No-Karite Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Awww...How sad...; ;'' Poor Pinkie...
ChaoCream Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
O.O I really like this ending... I feel bad that Pinkie Pie died... But I love this type of twist.
foxyfox117 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BlueWolf-2020 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
I like this one!
narutofan443 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
I know your working on Silent Ponyville 3, and the game version of this story, but I think it would be awesome if you made a follow up story for this showing them telling the others, and how things change.
FinalGamer Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
Shit...that's a pretty fantastic twist right there. I could take this ending as to see the other ones.
bronygod Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I could live with this ending. I wonder what her sister's talent was though...
blasphemy999 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011  Student Artist

i love good twist endings.

by good i mean the kind no one ever ever ever expect
MegamanSora Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
Sad part is, this is one of the happier endings.
TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
pinkie cracked in this one...
Finalawesomeness Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
Seems...Plausible. Somehow.
Apollo9000 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011
Zintic Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student General Artist
so sad.. but 5 is the best one :D
Dreadmaster231 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
I think so far... Best ending but still have 3 more to read

Achievement unlocked

Wait... What... Who am I?

(Find out who you really are by not leaning who arn't by who isn't you)

"The mind is like a toy, The more you play with it... The faster it breaks, you can put it on shelf but, it just gets dusty and useless, Try to protect it and it becomes weak... Only way to insure it's survival... Build it correctly
Jiro-Dyne Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
ok, have to comment. Haven't seen all of the other endings yet. but this is the best one so far! :D
Ziblink Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
eye's doesn't have an apostrophe in it. (That's a possessive apostrophe, which doesn't make sense in that sentence.)
Wingman626 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i like this endining better than the first two.

i love happy endings, but sometimes we need some tragic twists once in a while.

the story was amazing (minus the mispelled words)
IDK-youTellMe Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
But... Pinkie... the... what...
AlicornBob Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Student General Artist
Why do you insist on making my emotions crash through my mind with such a forceful consistency? But honestly, amazing work.
silentsteel Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
A twist and then some. I was expecting something, but not this.
redphienix Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing work with this twisted memory overtaking her, downright glorious actually xD
ShuyinK Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
I like this ending the best so far
Whitbane Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
Hell of A story, man. Awesome.
At least this ending is better than "Game Over" and "It's time to get baking."
astrotoadp5 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
The only reason this story would have to annoy me is that I don't like referring to her sister as Bellamina. I call the other members of her family Inky, Blinky & Clyde. :P
jake-heritagu Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Other thank Octavia not really sounding like Inky, I actually tried t ogive Bellamina a name where it would sense that if she grew up and got a nickname, that Blinkie would make sense for that nickname, much like Pinkamena became Pinkie. Admittably, Octavia is a little harder to work into Inkie, but I still just like the idea of them being sisters (even if I don't believe its canon in the show lol)
astrotoadp5 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011
Oh ok, bellamina's her "full" name. awesome xD & i basically exclude Octavia from the group. I picture her mother as Inky & her father as Clyde. :P
Kujiiro Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Whoa. Words fail me. In a good way.
CraZyGrEeNHyENa Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I read all the chapters and ending and this one right here SERIOUSLY screws with my brain. AFTER reading this one it mad reading the next two ending next to impossible cause the whole bellamina thing. Amazing story, wish there was more to read. I hope you make another grimdark story as awesome as this one
Cirdec Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
Gonna' be really awkward next time she speaks to Octavia. Seriously, I can't imagine Octavia taking it very well when she finds out that her living sister is pretending to be her dead sister, and even worse, believing it herself and getting everyone in Ponyville to believe it too.
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